Saturday, October 3, 2015

OctPoWriMo Day 3 -Lack of Energy - haiku

Using today's prompt for this one..an athlete has no energy and this is told in 17 syllables. Felt that would be symbolic as well for the writer when has little energy but still wants to put out a good product.


No Energy
Limbs will not function
Mind will not allow moving
No race won today.

6 comments:

  1. I know the feeling well. Bon courage

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  2. well expressed in seventeen syllables.

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  3. Aww, so sorry. :( But sometimes those who hang back get to pick the prettiest flowers. :)

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  4. Wow! I think there is a winner. Very creative use of the prompt.

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  5. Wow! I think there is a winner. Very creative use of the prompt.

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  6. When it's time, it's time then. Just wait for it to come back :)

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